Literary appreciation story " I used to live here once"

In this story there are three characters, they are She, a boy and a little girl.The first character is She, She wants to show herself that she is a main character, She has story and She is telling herself. She wants to invite us enter to this story, She wants to invite us have same sense with herself. Basically, She wants to talk about her experience and She wants us to be a good listener.
In the first story, the author talk about environment its make us as if we were there.we can imagine things there everything and in the next paragraph the author talk about thing and sense.next, the author start to present a character and the author start to describe things, like the grass was yellow and add a character and start to speaking between others.The author add his grey eyes as if we imagine a someone has grey eyes.